I like this! a sense of emotion the can make the reader feel it too! good job and keep it up!

I love this poem, it made me feel sad but good because now i am glad that i have said what i wanted to say to the one i truly love.. Even if im not with him now i still feel betta knowing that i have tried and done the rite thing, because who knows what could/could've happened if i didnt...
keep writing poems, ur good =]

Aww this is sooo sad. I hope she is watching down on him and heard what he said. Great poem 5/5
-vino

p.s.
post some more so i have something else to read lol

Beautiful :)