Dang lol i liked the way you wrote this. Especially the ending. What's wrong with her?...no one knows. It was all mysterious. It was awesome. 5/5
-vino

Whoa thats reali touching (for me at least).. i reali love all ur poems u r my most favourite author.. keep up the poem writing.. =] 5/5

Your best poem so far. really hit's hard