Empty thoughts

by Hopeless Romantic   May 13, 2004


Many things on my mind yet
it's hard to write them down.

So many feelings but I
can't explain them.

I want to tell you the truth,
but nothing comes out.

I am crying, but no tears from my eyes.

I wish that I knew what was on my mind, but my thoughts have been erased,

But I still want to remember you. The way you use to be until I changed your life.

plz tell me what you think I will take any kind of criticism.

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  • 20 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    Great start you have here...I agree with Martin... dig deeper... be a little more specific about why you feel what you feel.
    You have a LOT of potential!