Good-bye love...

by Splashley   Dec 26, 2007


I look in the mirror and i see a face staring back at me. I'm depressed. he left me. he was my everything, my life. i carved his name in my arm. i still love him. my heart is beating so fast. i take my blood-covered razor and hold it to my neck. now that he's gone, i have nothing to live for. i slowly cut around my neck. blood is dripping to the floor like a water faucet. i suddenly fall to the floor, razor still in my hand. my parents heard me fall. they come running to the bathroom. on the wall they see my blood saying "i loved him". i am dead. my parents cry. i am now alone in my grave. good-bye world. good-bye my one and only love...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Anonymous

    Great job! Nothing else to add, besides... that was FANTABULISTICABULOUS!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats very powerful xx well done xx

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Great job. It's well written. Go read my new one plz. 5/5
    -vino