Very, very powerful and effective. I can relate to the emotions that you expressed here. I like your intense tone and whole great monologue.
The repetition of the first stanza in the end left great impression on me- it was fantastic way to encircle whole poem.
You did good job with rhymes- they are not typical and the rhyming don't seem forced which is excellent.
The fourth stanza is my favorite.
All in all, greatly done!

A little sad, a little dark, and unquestionably about life, yet it wouldn't have been quite so powerful in any catagory but this. A tremendously heartbreaking verse, especially to whomever it was meant for, I imagine.

Dang..that's good. It's good to not let anything keep you down. Great job. 5/5
-vino

Darla sorry

Very deep and intense words within this poem.
Good job!
Take Care Cindy
Happy New Year

It was overall a wonderful poem.

ui like the concept, i have a friend like that.

i love the emotion spi;lled in and the rhyme scheme is pretti good.

the only flaw is this line:
Yet anything you ever did never really made sense

it seems jumbled and hard to read, mayb try

"yet nothing u did ever made any sense."

k?
loves,
~sore

Emotions perfected in writing!loved it!!