Comments : Inevitability of love

  • 16 years ago

    by A girl broken until

    This poem is so passionate.
    its as though the lover is trying to control someones life, as that person runs away.
    Beautifully written.
    'You told me love was inevitable,
    And so is your fate'
    its so crazy(in a good way)
    i love it
    5/5

    xoxoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by Just Jade

    Wow ... lauren sounded like it was coming straight out of the authors head :) anyways again adam i am running out of things to say ... it was awesome as usual