Such a sad poem. with a sad ending. but a great poem at that. in every school there's that ONE girl that goes through this. but people nowadays spend most of their time hiding themselves. b/c they dont wanna be judged wrongly. and they're afraid of being themselves. and it's f*ed up b/c thatz what our generation has become. great poem. amazing write. 5/5.

Thats really powerful, its so moving and really has a lot of meaning in it, well done and keep this up xxxx

This was a really good piece the message it had was very real and emotional. Most people dont really know how to express some very difficult spots in life but you got every feeling down.great job 5/5

Hell

OMG that was soooo good, i luv the ending, it was a perfect way to end it
"She wrote a suicide note
And lets just say
That's the last thing
She wrote "
this poem was very sad but it was well worded and put together, im adding it to my favs
good job
5/5

Omg i love this poem,even though its sad...i like how you made the point she killed herself with making the poem very long...I love...!!!!=)

I know that there are guys out there that do only want sex but there are also guys out there that see the beauty within also. You wrote an awsome poem but these lines are pulling at my soul.

"She wears sweaters
And long sleeved shirts
To hide the cuts
That cover her arms"

I have been there and done that. Please PM me if you want to know more because I'm not going to talk about it in a comment.

This is amazing, i know how you feel about a guy doing that trust me i know im with Daniel on this i've been threw it to. Its not healthy at all and its not right to do but i think something triggers yourself to react on it and hurt yourself.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Wow, that was very powerful, and so full of emotion. I love your writing, you are definitely one of my favorite writers. Keep up the amazing work!

Wow, this is really brilliant poem. I love the story. It's really great. You deserve another 5/5

Okay, your flow was off a lot in this peice. It broke in certain places and almost ruined the poem. The story behind it was heart breaking but still a little cliche. I think that you may have tried to drill the same thing into the reader over and over but still a good peice.

Amber :]]

So sad...

I really like this poem, its so sad but beautifully written, deffinately something I can relate to. 5/5

This deep and propa powerful wen ur readin it! if u feelin this way keep your chin up im sure evrythin will wrk out fine

Aisha
x

Wow this is great. totally describes me, although im still alive =D

This was a very lovely poem
I liked it because I can truly relate
if this poem is about you
know your not alone
There were some issues with flow
but oh well
it might be because you had no punctuation
But I rather enjoyed this
5/5
kaila

This poem is very intresting. i liked it very much. exspecailly the ending.. very sad. great job

A powerful poem full of emotion you kept the readers attention well in the piece however in places it did not flow.

Nice poem u did good keep it up and hope that u can hit up mine the one that says "i died" and "him" ok

I mean "why" not him

You already have so many comments, i'm not sure their is much to add. just wanted to tell you it was great and it's now in my fav. poems