Alright this poem was pretty good. but i can see some flawys...it doesnt really flow all that well. but i could still feel some of the emotion. it ryhns in parts and then doesnt in others and that made me have to re-read some of the lines. but all in all i did like it. good job 4/5

AMAZING. i love it. very good 5\5 i love it.

This was a wonderfully written poem with such powerful emotion. You keep us wanting to read on... which with a long poem like this is very important. People sometimes write a long poem that loses a lot as you get farther into it. Really well done!

Wow this is really sad... strong emotion .. great job

Oh wow, the flow was a bit rocky.. but the concept was so amazing. I have a poem you might like called "Persuading Act"
It's just about the same as this one :]

Good job, dear.

Wow i loved it
its rlly good
:]
5/5
ur a rlly good writer

Very sad
5/5

I really like this poem,so true you never know what sum1 else is feeling,5/5

Beautiful, and very very sad. </3

This is a good poem, but the flow was a bit off. It has the potential to be a great poem, except the stanzas need a bit of help. I hope this helped to make them poem better.

.:CiNdY:.

This was a very sad poem. Unfortunely I can relate to the most part of this poem very well. I'm better now, but it's a part of my life I wish I could go back and change, but then again it's made me the strong person I am today. It was very emotional for me.

Wellll, only one mistake this time. :]]

But their wrong
^^Their should be they're.

Cayce xx

Some issues with the flow, not to many, i liked it and mental pictures of many of the girls at my school kept running through my head as i read this, 5/5

This is very emotional poem, great job... i know who its about too. btw you are beautiful

Woahhh, thats real good.
but real sad at the same time.

She thinks she's no beauty
^ This line seemed too forced.
Other than that, pretty good. Still,
can use some work but better than
the last poem I read. Just keep
trying hun. And try and be more creative,
if you are going to write a cliche poem,
try and mix it up and use bigger words
but keep it simple.
4/5
<3TAy

Oh this was truly so so sad. i loved how you told a story from both the perspective of the world and the girl who is misunderstood by the world.

a very tragic tale which happens all to often. i absolutely loved it. your style of writing is absolutely stunning and you really have a lot of talent!!

this was a very powerful piece from start to end, i particularly liked you ending. great job, wish i could give you more than just a 5!! take care