Awaiting

by Rod   Dec 26, 2007


Look, can you see? It's there through the snow,
a glimmer of hope, the passage to Spring.
Our south-rising sun, climbs higher each day,
and each now grows longer, though we think it not so.

Through cloud, and through snow, my thoughts turn to May.
There's cardinal's and blue-jay's, look... snowbird's abound!
Perhaps they know more, than we are allowed.
So rise up with cheer, let's set about joy! And know that tomorrow, Spring will be near.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    Edit:
    The only thing I have to edit is this line:
    There's cardinal's and blue-jay's, look
    It literally translates into there is cardinal's
    It should be there are cardinals. And as for the 's that either means, ownership, or is. I'm sure you just mean more than one bird. Plural.

    Response:
    I liked it. God, I can't wait until it starts to get warm over here, in Ohio. I'm going nuts waiting for heat.
    The description was great and easy to picture, so good job on that. The title was simple, yet, eye catching. Besides that small line, I saw no mistakes.

    Rating:
    Five.

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