Edit:
The only thing I have to edit is this line:
There's cardinal's and blue-jay's, look
It literally translates into there is cardinal's
It should be there are cardinals. And as for the 's that either means, ownership, or is. I'm sure you just mean more than one bird. Plural.

Response:
I liked it. God, I can't wait until it starts to get warm over here, in Ohio. I'm going nuts waiting for heat.
The description was great and easy to picture, so good job on that. The title was simple, yet, eye catching. Besides that small line, I saw no mistakes.

Rating:
Five.