It's a VERY cute poem. I think a little more description would make it wonderful. But excellent work! =]

That's adorable. :)

Excellent poem. Reminded me of feelings I had when I fell in love with the woman I wrote my poem you commented about. Excellent work though... made me a bit sad since the girl I was thinking of can't return those feelings.

That was very good, full of happiness good job

AWW this was really sweet. Atleast you had someone on Christmas...I really loved how it was written so perfectly. You are a good writer. Keep the good works.
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Jenn

Cute. :]

Firstly I suggest adding in comas, full stops etc.

Secondly ;

"Look in[to] my eyes [,] or [;] see the desire,"

I think that line needs a break, Makes it much more strong. If that makes sense? Heh.
And "into" flowed better if you put the coma/semi-colon in. :]

"I cant explain any of these feelings,
That make my heart go constantly reeling."

The flow was off in this couplet, Maybe rearrange the words a few times to create a flow that fits in with the entire poem?
It's the only point of the poem I felt the flow was forced.

Good job all in all. (=

Aww, this was such a beautiful poem. I love the way you explaining the feeling of a christmas day. Great job! 5/5

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Oh that was very fantastic! it really made me smile in the first line seems funny and sweet! very creative 5/5

Naw it was to cute. and yes i have to say it, (only because people pick on me for it :[) punctuality!!! Otherwise perfect. The emotions are great.
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Taegan Emily

Wow another great poem!
i hope you realize how great of a writter you are!!!
5/5

<3 i love you silly