Wow very touching piece .. it really reminds something alot about child.. and it seems it has a great dedication to eveyone and i can truly ralate at the same time.. great message and very powerful..

Awwww, thats a very good poem well done for writig this xxx

I like it. It took me a bit of time to get used to the rhythm, but once I did, I quite liked it, and the meaning of the poem itself was also rather good and done well.

Brad