I could tell that this poem was filled with such powerful emotion from the first couple lines. I loved the flow and the suspenseful-ness.

Brooke<3

Good pome with good ending xx

Sometimes our experiences are where we draw our inspiration from, this is a great example of that. So many questions are left to be answered in this poem, and I think it works that way. Very nice write. O, and by the way this wasn't a favor it was a pleasure! Keep writing, find your voice.

Your friend
Chris

This is very deep also its very good... You really put emotions in your poems and thats what makes them so good hope not all the things you write about is true... 5/5

Wow such a tragic poem but very well written. the emotions so deep i feel like i am there with you. 5/5

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Beautiful.<3

Hey this is another nicely penned piece, i like the way it kept me asking for more, its like a story that one enjoys reading.. Good work, keep it up

Hey this is another nicely penned piece, i like the way it kept me asking for more, its like a story that one enjoys reading.. Good work, keep it up

People defer from one another and most of the times not all the people we meet are good, I think this one is about being so strong despite the reality of the world that not all would understand us. KUDOS Sarah! I really enjoyed this one.