Hurt

by Sarah   Dec 27, 2007


I am sitting in
my bath tub
with a razor blade
in my hand
the ludicrous things you do
I cant even stand

Those words you said
I couldnt believe there were true
you put me in such wretchedness
when you said the words "i hate you,"

I slit my wrist deeper
the tub turns crismon red
I will make you happy
once you see me dead

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  • 16 years ago

    by Frank the Great

    Great poem, i really enjoyed it. well written and full of deep emotion

  • 16 years ago

    by Sara Sutton

    Ohh my god.
    i love it.
    but it's sad=(
    but i still love it! it's beautiful!
    <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Becca

    That was a powerful poem. I know that feeling. Great way to put it in words.

  • 16 years ago

    by Im not broken anymore

    Wow!! This is so great- Perfectly writen great wording you paint a picture with your word so far my favorite poem GREAT GREAT job!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amber

    O wow really strong.
    I liked it tho

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