Wow, great wording and flow was so awesome and fluent, i got to the end and all i could think about is love...
great poem
thanks for the comment

Brautiful write 5/5

This is everything love should be....ur everything...wonderful representation! 5/5

Looking into a lovers face, i wish it hadent been so long, i love this poem it takes me back

Awww I LOVE IT ! its an incredible poem, you did a fantastic job. Keep up the good work :)

I wuv thiz one, omg, itz so sweet.....lol
5/5
~your soothing voice
words so deep, and profound
i wish to hear day and night~
is tha best!!!

This is very nice, its very descriptive too, like the choice of words and the perfectly times rhymes.. Good work.

This is very nice, its very descriptive too, like the choice of words and the perfectly times rhymes.. Good work.

I like the way u write

Flowed decently, though the subject seems more like a crush from what I interpret, not love. Aside from that it is good though.