by Makesha
I love this poem. it shows emotion and true characteristic. it show stuff that happens in everyday life and thas why i love it. |
I dont know you but i love this poem that you wrote, and i think that you are very brave |
Crystal, you kno i love u, and i wish i could take u away from everything tht has happened to you, and everything tht is currently hurting you, b cuz i love u to much, and i hate theres notthing tht i can do, but like i said, u ever need me, call me, 654-6291 |
Poem wise, I think the lirics, the flow could have been better. |
Thats a really good and emotional poem im sorry to hear of your pain its like that for me but hey dont worry about it keep your head up and smile even if it hurts. your not alone with this pain my friend |