Flawless Girl [monotetra]

by Anonymous   Dec 27, 2007


Her hair is blowing in the wind,
So fair, so soft, her glowing skin.
Impossible for her to sin.
She's innocent, She's innocent.

Penetrating - and lustrous eyes
That look right through into your mind.
Perfect shape at an ideal size.
Grace that stops time, Grace that stops time.

A flawless girl from head to toe.
Fragile hands, a delicate nose,
She has the fragrance of a rose.
She doesn't know, She doesn't know.

As modest as an Amish girl,
As perfect as an oyster's pearl.
There is no man that walks this world
Deserves this girl, Deserves this girl

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  • 16 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Aw! This made me smile big!
    I think it's flawlesssss :]
    It kinda reminds me of my poem "Persuading Act" Just.. opposite. HAHA.

    It's great, it really is. The flow was amazing. But, It could've repeated a bit less.

    Other than that, I absolutely loved it. Especially, the ending :]

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Wow, this poem was absolutely amazing. It's very descriptive of how the girl is. The flow and the emotion were very powerful. Great job! 5/5

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    I liked the way you described the girl. As most poem do, you described a perfect girl: modest, beautiful and understanding. All flow and rhymes went well with the meaning. Nice piece 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    A poem format ive never seen before 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Void

    :) Much better. And I like what you did with the word 'grace'. After telling you to change that I was trying to come up with something to help you out a bit, but I was way too tired.

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