Awwww how good is that!! well done xxx

Wow. I don't even know what to say. I loved it though. Lol. The repitition used throughout the whole peice was great and added extra emotion that most peices are missing. I liked every stanza, but the second one was my favorite.

"See those music notes on the chorus line?
Etch them within your skin, darling.
They tell all the words I never said,
and all answers that I didn't know.
Then bury me inside your screams
and when you have to go fight back tears
that tell the story of your dreadful life."

Those words just really stuck out to me and are pain filled. Another beautiful write from you. Great job!
5.5

Amber :]]