This is such a beautifully sad piece, I enjoyed it from start to finish and it touched my heart. I agree with the above I also got that image though I also seen it as a child who wasn't able to talk yet. I like this because it can be interpreted in many different ways which catches my interest. The whole piece was heart wrenching. I liked the format and the style it was different but flowing. Well done on writing an intriguing piece. Keep it up. I look forward to checking out some more of your work over time. ~Mel

Hey lauren ... thats really heartfelt coz i no exactly who ur talkin about and i no lil james would wanna say that to donna coz she is a great mum

Aww thats so sad hunny, thats really good work. you xpressed your feelings well and desperation to be closer with your mum. thats good and if you cant tell her you love her write it. show her this ?

you done good well done xx hugs xx