I Belong To You

Another beautiful and touching poem.
the emotion was very well captured.
and very nicely expressed.
and a beautiful ending as well. 5/5.

Wow, I really like this one too, gave you a 5, and just want you to know that I'm so totally jealous if you've found someone who can truely make you feel this way ^^

Aww
this is also a cutee one
I liked the last stanza
it was my favorite
again
I think the poem needed
more of your inner emotion
with that your poems would be
phenomenal
nice job
4.5/5
kaila

This is beautiful again :]
you did an amazing job.
i love how it all fight together.
and the ending very beautiful.
glad you have that special someone.
when you said that people think
you dreaming your life away,
they dont understand what you have.
they will sooner or later.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Everyone says I dream my life away,
Because of everything I say.
But I guess every word they say is true,
Because I truly belong to you.

That stanza was my favorite...
Keep up the good work!!!
You deserve another 5/5...
No critics, everything just fine and great!!!