U BETTER BELONG TO ME. LOL. I LOVE U BABY, AND YOU KNOW I BELONG TO U BABY, ALWAYS!

A very good poems a couple of typos -

I've always pictures my life by your side,
And this time I can say is it's a reality.
I hope this reality never ends,
Because without you,
My life has no meaning.

"pictures" = pictured
"say is it's a" = say it's a

Wow this is another sweet piece of poem.. hmm i mean this is more sweet that the other one i had read. very awesome! u had really express ur feelings very well.. i love this i really enjoyed.. the whole lines from the first stanza til the end was cute and lovely.. love it 5/5

Sweet poem, well expressed and well written, though a few typos, but overall, a good read

Again I sense the imagery, but the flow seems chopped up! You've got a geat vague of it, but to me when I read it to myself it gets all choppy.

4/5 again :) Keep on writing ^_^

Everyone says I dream my life away,
Because of everything I say.
But I guess every word they say is true,
Because I truly belong to you.

^^ I loved this verse, and I think it was your strongest one. the flow was there, and so was the power and emotion. It just worked really well!

I loved the rest of the poem but again try and work on some of the flow.

Everyone says I dream my life away,
Because of everything I say.
But I guess every word they say is true,
Because I truly belong to you.

That stanza was my favorite...
Keep up the good work!!!
You deserve another 5/5...
No critics, everything just fine and great!!!

This is beautiful again :]
you did an amazing job.
i love how it all fight together.
and the ending very beautiful.
glad you have that special someone.
when you said that people think
you dreaming your life away,
they dont understand what you have.
they will sooner or later.

keep it up.
keep on writing.
love always and forever.

Aww
this is also a cutee one
I liked the last stanza
it was my favorite
again
I think the poem needed
more of your inner emotion
with that your poems would be
phenomenal
nice job
4.5/5
kaila

Wow, I really like this one too, gave you a 5, and just want you to know that I'm so totally jealous if you've found someone who can truely make you feel this way ^^

Another beautiful and touching poem.
the emotion was very well captured.
and very nicely expressed.
and a beautiful ending as well. 5/5.