That is a very well written well versed poem you seem so articulate for just 15 I think you you will go as far as you desire to / on the down side / in the first line it says In the lost city and angel, I think you mean an angel / then on the third line it says :a knight and shining armour I think you mean /
In shining armour / but it is realy good I would be proud to have written it , keep it up , I'll go read more