I really like it. I could picture everything. It's a really good use of imagery and the vocabulary is really good too. good job 5/5!

Hey this is great!!! Is there anything yoiu write that isn't great. I love the way you express the emotions. The words flow together perfectly. A wonderful writing. Keep it up. One question....What is the insperation for this writing? Send a PM.....5/5 form me...

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This poem was really interesting and brilliantly written ^^
Great job XD

Amazing.
Everything was so strong and truthful.
I like your choice of words.
And the emotion was captured very well.
your an amazing poet. :]
great write. 5/5.

As has been said you are an amazing writter. I found myself to to spellbound by the imagery, poetic wording, and storyline while reading this outstanding piece.

Ok gr8 work keep it up