Hey this is really good. I like the transition from really sad to happy ending... Have you ever tried doing it the other way and leaving the reader with emotions of sorrow? Or maybe a twist? I'm sure you'd be good at it. :)

I like it, but who was it about?

Mhmm wonderful joband well written a piece of advice girls are not everything buti lvoe how u use a dark illusion combining love fantasy and death all combined into one rhym i lvoe it 5/5