I love everything about this piece. You wrote it in a good way and expressed emotions greatly. I can relate to this in a way. Whole poem is original and interesting. You did excellent job with rhymes.
My favorite stanza is:
- Pure Intentions drive my actions,
But self destruction is the result,
I feel as if this life rejected me,
And left me in a renegade faction.-
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Fantastic!
The fact that you said so much in just three stanzas is impressing. I like your choice of words in the whole poem a lot.
Powerful and unique piece from the first to the last line.