by Curing the Comon Cliche Dec 28, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
I am here |
by StandStill
WOW. you definitely can see the improvement in just wording alone. not to mention, the feeling in your poems has been like HUGELY improved on, which i'm glad for. |
by GoyaCracker
Wow. thats really good. |
by Danielle
Hey, I like this poem a lot because I went through the same thing. |
by SweetDreamz
Theres alot of powerful imagery there.well done. I really like this. ;p |
by Talieka
This is a reali good poem, but it is also reali sad =[ |