Comments : My White Room

  • 16 years ago

    by MeltInHisArms

    It's so deep and explains how almost every relationship is, keep on writting and i'll keep on reading! 5/5
    xoxo
    ~waiting~

  • 16 years ago

    by Talieka

    This is a reali good poem, but it is also reali sad =[
    keep up the good work =]
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by SweetDreamz

    Theres alot of powerful imagery there.well done. I really like this. ;p

  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hey, I like this poem a lot because I went through the same thing.
    Keep writing, its great; very inspirational

    & thanks for the comment. haha.

  • 16 years ago

    by GoyaCracker

    Wow. thats really good.

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    WOW. you definitely can see the improvement in just wording alone. not to mention, the feeling in your poems has been like HUGELY improved on, which i'm glad for.

    you don't need me
    like I need you
    I guess my violets
    will never be blue

    ^ hahaha. irony.