Love so golden and new
Love so shiny and bright
You're my sword and my shield
That protects me every night

above mention lines are wonderful'

nice work
5/5

My sweet friend,

So good to see you posting another of your wonderful poems. Please reconsider joining us once more at RTVW, hehe!

Love,

5/5 Ingrid

This is a really lovely and beautiful poem David.
"You're an angel from heaven
You're my sun in the sky
That eternally burns through my soul
The person there when I cry"
I loved that stanza. it deserves way more then a 5. 5/5

Kalee

Awwww thats so sweet i can really feel the love u have for this person
"You're my sword and my shield
That protects me every night." those 2 lines r just so amazing and sweet
great work :)
5/5

Wonderful jod david
so long time no talk huh
this is an excellent piece
im glad you updated
lovely job
5/5
yours truly
kaila

Wow, so nicely written great poem
keep up the great work like always
a 5/5 from me as u deserve it truly

I think the ending needed a bit more closure BUT once again i liked it. It was a great poem that i feel like i can relate to. You created great imagery with the words chosen to pull in the reader from the very first line. loved it
xx
Taegan Emily

I liked this very much David, sometimes I think there is so much beauty in something being said simplistically but with emotion and sincerity,nice rhymes and flow.

Thats a lovely delicate poem hon, it really touches me as something special for a person to hang onto. xox sam

This poem truely shows how grateful you are.
If only everyone had a "protector" like yours. amazing
5/5