This is a very sad, but beautiful poem. i lobe your rhyming techniques. and i can relate to this poem, but instead to a girl named ashton. keep up the good work. 5/5

WOW, you are a very good writer. You should keep up the good work. You transfer your emotions into your poetry quite good and you make it where I feel what you felt during the writing of the piece. Great work. 5/5