Comments : First kiss

  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra

    Nice 5/5 very good

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    Very nice
    first kisses are always special
    a thing to improve on:
    make sure your next poem
    there is something original
    it will draw in an audience
    plus it makes the poem have more of an edge
    5/5
    kaila

  • 16 years ago

    by thegirltheydontsee

    I like it its, good, ur flow is off on some points, but for the most part is is good.