My friend
by she Dec 28, 2007
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I cover the bruises i cover the cuts because my friend i think Ive put you through enough. i smile through the pain so you will think that I'm OK. i hide the tears so that my eyes begin to look fake and you'll remain safe. when you ask whats wrong, i once again say "nothing I'm fine" and when you turn around i pray that you'll never see my bruises and cut's beneath my linen cuff's.because my friend i think I've put you through enough. i hope you never find that I'm lying and discover the truth, because my Friend I'd rather pretend, I'd rather hide the cut's, hide the bruises so that your smile will never fade, and you'll remain forever okay. |
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16 years ago
by pookiengurgi
Everybody has their own style of writing poetry so I disagree with FallenAngel's comment...you want to abbreviate?go ahead..if it fits you/your poem. btwe this was a very well written poem, you're emotion was stated clearly...you're friend should know they have a great friend looking out for them-wonderful poem.
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16 years ago
by Fear2love
I wove this one,lol
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16 years ago
Good 1 sneakers!!! that tottaly shows ur personality!!! i think its 1 of ur best!!
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16 years ago
by FallenAngel
Abbreviations in poetry , such as 'b/c' instead of because are a no-no, but the depth and truth of your poem wasn't lost in translation because of it. Keep practicing and you'll get alot better
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16 years ago
by Baby Rainbow
Thats one of your best honey, that really is good, but true friends will be there no matter what and guide you through, let them be there for you im always here ok? xxxxxxx
