Deaths Marching Band

by Suicidal Love   Dec 28, 2007


I take a knife
To my wrist
Slice it through
You get my gist

Blood drips down
Causing pain
But self control
I stand to gain

Suicide note
On the wall
A bloody warning
To you all

No more pain
Could I take
My smiling face
It was a fake

Would you care
If I died?
You said you would
I said you lied

Blood on wrists
Gun in hand
My CD plays
Deaths marching band

I drop the knife
Fall to the floor
I am gone
My life, no more

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  • 12 years ago

    by lost angel

    It was well written amazing and heart braking. been there and still strugling.

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is amazing! It is so good, the flow is wonderful and it is so intriguing.

  • 14 years ago

    by victoria

    Wow!!! this is byfar one of my favorite poems i have ever read. I truly felt this one. I, myself, suffored from self-harm for 4 years...and i just loved how you used that life is nothing but a marching band. Its so true. Great job. true talent.

  • 15 years ago

    by xToBeWithYoux

    This poem has so much emotion in it! It's so powerful and flowing and, well amazing really. I love the short but statement making lines, very clever :)

    Keep it up! :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Twisted Mind Broken Soul

    OMG I freakin love this poem it's totally amazing I have never read anything like this before...I wish I had your talent 5/5

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