Wow..
i love it
i can relate

This is excellant i cant even say anything to it. amazing. 5\5 so much emotion and i understand the hardships of this im sure alot of people do.

Omg... I love this poem soo much even though its very sad. I kinda wrote somthing like this before i like it alot. i give you a 5/5 kasia

Beautiful, very well written... and i really love the title...5/5

I love it
u can rlly picture some1 doing that
great job
:]

Wonderfully written

keep it up

take care

good luck

Wow, I haven't read something like that for a while, I needed that. Thanx.
You've showed me once again that poetry is definatly worth it (Im on a writers blockand this will definatly help me get through it.)
5/5
onyx~

Great job
XD
I really enjoyed reading this 1!!
5/5
=]

I really loved thiis poem :) 5/5

I love it you may like some of my poems check them out and vote&comment them!!! your a great writer

Wow this kept me reading to the very end check out my poems you might like some comment&vote

"Blood on wrists
Gun in hand
My CD plays
Deaths marching band"
relating to teen death nice work- raindrops 5/5

I like this one it flows really well and paints a picture...

Oh, my god. That poem is so awesome, and I can really relate.

This poem..is very good..
well done.man
a very good..writer..
xxx

Technically I see nothing wrong with this poem. The flow is brilliant, the rhyming, perfect. I'm just not really a fan of the actual theme. I don't really go for the whole "suicide/cutting" theme in poetry. I find it to be somewhat overdone, and unless tackled in a unique way, can leave a poem with many cliches.

The poem itself is fine, but I suppose I'm slightly biased since I'm just not a fan of the genre. Sorry.

This is a good poem it made me think of my life and how somethimes i wanted to kill myself but i know that suicide is just a perminant problem to a temporary solution dont do it

OMG I freakin love this poem it's totally amazing I have never read anything like this before...I wish I had your talent 5/5

This poem has so much emotion in it! It's so powerful and flowing and, well amazing really. I love the short but statement making lines, very clever :)

Keep it up! :D

Wow!!! this is byfar one of my favorite poems i have ever read. I truly felt this one. I, myself, suffored from self-harm for 4 years...and i just loved how you used that life is nothing but a marching band. Its so true. Great job. true talent.