The expression here is deep, very deep emotions. I totally read each line with some suspense, I had to read it again. Great job.

The emotion was very well captured.
and i liked the wording and the wayy you wrote this. :] it confused me a bit. but still, an amazing poem, nonetheless. :] 5/5.

Wow! I felt a chill from this. Emotion poured like rain here. It was clear, simple and wonderful. 5/5