Comments : When Night Falls

  • 16 years ago

    by Not

    "I hope,
    I pray,
    Let none see through me,
    Let none hear my heat beat,
    Let none read it,
    Let none read me!"
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    fave part..=] reminds me off myself sad but true,

    your poem is awesome it truly is a beautiful write, the feeling was sooo strong and i believe that becus what you said was so true and honest, keep writing!!..=]