by chind
Yes, i agree with alexis it was kind of hard to understand but it didnt make the poem any less beatiful. |
by Shinobi
Liked the emotions and expressions all the way through. The lines really touched me: "It hurts, how you can ever break my heart |
Great poem. |
by unknown
Nice poem,, It flowed well.. Also it had a strong emotion inside.. Well done.. Keep up the good work.. 5/5 |
Um I tried editing it but i accidentally pressed back and it erased it all. |
Aw, this almost made me tear up. The emotion in this was so powerful and I really loved it. Great job! |
by Krysten
Wow reminds me of my late fiance, anyways good poem, the flow was a bit off. but great word choice. another 5/5 and thanks for the comments on mine |
And be love- I think it should be -and be loved- |
Simple thoughts can sometimes be the most beautiful, tragic, and hardest things to say. |
by jLegendc
One correction "Your such a simply everything to me" it's suppose to be "You're simply everything to me" hmm that's it.. nice poem.. =] write your heart out next tym... |
by RobinAnn13
I liked the emotion. Not one of my favorites but worth reading. The message is clear and your word choice was good. ^.^ |
by Michelle18
Well this was really hard to understand... the sentences didnt make sense...i had to read it a few times to understand it..maybe you should revise it a little. |
by she
So very sad,but good job |
by Marius Laun
Well it was good. Simplicity would be the one word to describe it. It was sad and actually I am sort of going throught the same thing as what you wrote. So It was very close to home. Good job |
by Sumit Ojha
Good Job |
by Kitten
Very wll written simple and to the point i like it |
by noha
Great feeling come through, romantic ,so sweet , i love it |