Who am i?
What have i become?
Have i lost myself in this storm?
When did i start to believe those lies?
Those self-hating, self-destroying hands pulled me deeper.
When did i give into their lure?
When did those self-injuring secrets begin to consume my fragile heart?
Where did i falter?
Where did i fail?
When did this mountain collapse?
Buried beneath an avalanche of pain.
Have i lost it?
Am i finally gone?
Lost in this, my fevered heart?
Sacrificing myself for release?
When did this happen?
When did i lose myself?
Can i come back to the land of the living and happy?
Or am i too far gone?
I luv the way its mostly questions, cuz thats what a mind of someone whos depressed is like just questions over and over again
i like the way u structured it,
great job