by Christina Dec 29, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
In Jr. high we were |
by Not
Very sad but well written another good poem,found no mistakes...keep writing..=) |
Aww...... i love this poem.. great job.. the flow was nice and the emotion was strong... good choice of words |
Another great write! You have a lot of talent and I really enjoy your style! I think many many people have been here before, you did a great job of portraying the idea! Wonderful! Keep it up! |
by Blissful
I liked how it was a story and I could follow along nicely without getting lost which made it interesting. I do think you could add a little more emotion to it beside the simple "I love you" Like why do you love him and how does he make you feel. Well done. |
Sad. simple. sweet. beautiful. and amazing. |