U know ive told u i think this one and part 2 r ur best poems ever, good u put it on here

Slowly now
He begins to fade
He lost his love
I've died today

^^^I really enjoyed this part. you have a lot of talent. I can relate. No sympathy, I'm just saying that for feelings so painful you really managed to express them incredibly. please check out some of my work. 5/5
kat