The Question

by Alissa   Dec 29, 2007


My hands are shaking because of you,
with the pressure of the greatest fall.
Small droplets roll down my cheek,
while my mind replays it all.

I can't forget that perfect day,
when you told me that I was the one.
When the words were more than gestures
and the moon was brighter than the sun.

I can't seem to understand,
I gave you everything I could.
Was the only reason why you left me,
was because you knew I never would?

My mind keeps buzzing since you left,
and I want the stress to fade away.
I can't express the pain I felt,
when you left me that Christmas day.

The Christmas feeling wasn't there,
and the happiness was all worn out.
I wanted to lock myself from the world,
and death was my calling, without a doubt.

I couldn't stand throwing myself down,
I gave you everything you wanted.
I put you in front of all my needs,
but even so I faulted.

So I lay and watch my hands shake,
and recall all the things we had.
I guess I'm searching for only an answer,
with a question I just don't even have.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya another sad sad sad poem
    but extremely well done
    made me want to call you and find out if your okay
    but im pretty sure that aint a good idea
    more for me then you
    anyways good job
    and keep writing dont knwo when ill be on again
    but i hope to see some more fantastic poem
    tata for now lmfao

    Keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    I couldn't stand throwing myself down,
    I gave you everything you wanted.
    I put you in front of all my needs,
    but even so I faulted.

    ^ I like how you ended this stanza with " but even so I faulted ". It had so much to say in a few words!

    I guess I'm searching for only an answer,
    with a question I just don't even have.

    ^^ I like these two lines. They have so much to say inside. I loved how you ended the poem with it.

    I think this poem has really a heartfelt beat to it.

    I hope to hear more of your poems from you.

    - TheWorldFellNUWerentThere.

  • 16 years ago

    by Diabolic Atrocity

    This is a great poem, I, as I'm sure with others, can relate to the feelings in this poem, and I think it's great you can write so well about something so strong with you only being 14. Kudos to you. Gave you a 5 as well ~_^

  • 16 years ago

    by TracyM

    Really liked this poem, well written and the flow was good, good choice of words, the sadness really screamed out in the poem. beautiufl.

  • 16 years ago

    by FridusBlueheaven

    I love your rhyme scheme and everything is very well organized. You really know how to write, also I love your emotional thought!!! It's 5/5!!!

Read All Comments (7)

More Poems By Alissa