Well it may not be as bad as you seem but i understand your pain of the poem very well its been awhile since ive been online wonder if you would read my newest poem 5/5 Ive been rather depressed lately and feeling numb, I dont know why but trying to figure it out. By the way your poetry got better

Beautiful poem.
i can totally relate. :]
i been through this a number of times.
and the feeling really sux. :[

the emotion here was greatly portrayed. :]
i like it. 5/5.