Wandering through the bush at night

by Anonymous   Dec 29, 2007


Wandering through the bush at night
Something to keep me occupied
Guided by the night sky's eye
Winking as the clouds go by

The trees are swaying back and forth
The leaves applaud the joy of life
The roots all cling onto their source
In a world unknown to pain and strife

The summer's air commended by
a placid breeze that fabricates
A mixed array of Ecstasy, There's
Something enchanting about this place

The smell of dew freshly collected
On the grass between my toes
Exposed, apparent, and connected
Witnessed by a sleeping rose

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  • 12 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Thank you!

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Such a vivid piece, I think thats great. You can make me go to this place if I close my eyes, which is such a wonderful skill. The word choice is pretty simple, yet somehow its not very bland. I really think you have penned something thats truly wonderful

    • 12 years ago

      by Anonymous

      This is like my only good poem lol

  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This was such a great poem.
    I don't really write any poems about life, but yours was just amazing.
    Great job!
    5/5

    *Cindy*

  • 16 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    This is great! all the lines are well expressed and it really flowed well. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Shinobi

    An amazing expression through a wide varient of words. All connected here with an amazing flow. Really liked the poem, all the description seem so real... 5/5

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