An amazing expression through a wide varient of words. All connected here with an amazing flow. Really liked the poem, all the description seem so real... 5/5

This is great! all the lines are well expressed and it really flowed well. 5/5

This was such a great poem.
I don't really write any poems about life, but yours was just amazing.
Great job!
5/5

*Cindy*

Such a vivid piece, I think thats great. You can make me go to this place if I close my eyes, which is such a wonderful skill. The word choice is pretty simple, yet somehow its not very bland. I really think you have penned something thats truly wonderful

Thank you!