*I need to know what you all think. This poem needs to be fixed and I need you to tell me what you think needs to be. So please rate, ad write comments, if u write a comment, I will happily read and write comments on your poems, just let me know what poem,
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YOUR HELP
I try to be better, and not to run,
Even though its so hard
I know I cant fall
I didnt look to you for help
But you gave it anyway
And as I look
I see my heart,
The way it is,
And I know, I have to change
To save my self
And the ones I love,
The things you said,
to make me see
will always stay in my thoughts,
this is my thanks
to whom this is to
only they know,
and it will be for them only,
so to say it strait,
thanks
