Couple of things....

first...

hour glad ran out of time..... hour glass?

I cant dream of, I can't.. dream of

In te same spot, "in the same spot?"

But not trult true, "but not truely true"?

and

Im sorry, should be I'm sorry ;)

5/5 with the corrections though
;)

Aw wow hun i can relate to this..i really liek the last stanza 5/5

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