Ooh!!!
This is one of my favorites!!!!!
I liked the way you said that you couldn't step back and fade!!!!!!
OMFG I love your poems!!!!
Haha.
But I really do!!!!!
Kono ii desu ne ....

Wow great read! i really like how you set it up too! amazing poem. :)

Your work is amazing--i especially liked this one...you showed you! I like when i can read something and see the one writing it

Awww. i love this poem. so full of emotion, power, meaning, depth. it was beautifully writtenn.
--lovedroughtmelody

I'll tell you who you are and who you were. :) I love this one too. I feel maybe these old poems are about us haha without knowing.