If i could just wish upon a star

Very nice to read. Enjoyed reading that. It has a good flow.

Oh that was impressive and actually the last stanza rocked me...I liked how u could mix these feelings together...so keep it up5/5

Lovely poem well written with a taste sadness and yearning.

"But if i could just wish upon a little star...
I guess I'd wish that i had of known who you are,
and i would wish that you were back here...
only to see that one final tear... "

Loved this last part, I can relate to it.
5/5

If I cud wish upon a star... gr8 topic, gr8 poem..

Who knows wat language stars speak & what n how many wishes r made by souls by d stars or shooting stars n how many break like d shooting stars n how many wishes come true t forever shine..

Gr8 poem... keep writin

Best wishz...Karan

Great job this poem has a vey good flow
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