by Jenn Dec 29, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
You cried because you had to, |
I liked the first stanza and the title fits your poem really well but I think you could have gotten into more depth with it just trying to help you with opinions nice poem though 4/5 maybe u can read one of mine. |
by Jenn
Comment my poems please. give them good comments and feed backs |