Life, love and lies

by Finalgravedigger   Dec 29, 2007


Life, love and lies

This long loneful life
filled with ever changing strifes
is caused by love and lies
that leaves one in a state of shrieking cries.

As life unfolds
a boys horrending fate is shown
having rose vines hold
a heart that was born to moan.

Meeting his true love
has him moving like a dove
but little does he know of the lie
that will have his heart slowly die.

Holding his small heart
she decided to simply tear it apart,
using his heaven as hell
his sky of light fell.

Hope evaporated form his faithful soul
as his angel of darkness tore at him more and more
note even left a least bit whole
there lay a mind and spirit that could no longer soar.

As she tuned away
he begged her not to leave
just wanting fate to stay
he could somehow still believe.

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  • 16 years ago

    by michael

    Wow love the poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jaded in ohio

    Wow, this poem is amazing ,many props to you, and for the record you were too good for her anyway,your heart is to grand to let a shallow soul taint it. keep up the great work and always remember to have fun and be safe in all you do. peace out

  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Deep emtion and i love this too much to think is too good to read.. u r great!

  • 16 years ago

    by aanderson

    This poem is really good, and the fact of the matter is that this is how love is and we fail to realize that who we love may not love us back. this is deep ill give it a 5

  • 16 years ago

    by Death Is Painless

    Very nice 5/5

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