My Undying Love...
by Sweet lig Dec 29, 2007
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8 years ago
by Dave
Very beautiful truly heartfelt over brimming with emotion
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16 years ago
by Sumit Ojha
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I Love your way of typing...
Oh by the way, you write really nice... you are a nice poet.
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16 years ago
by Michelle18
This is really good...the repeatition was good and i like the message behind it. ..you did a great job with this one.
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16 years ago
by RobinAnn13
Awww. This was one sad AND sweet. It's hard to accomplish that. I liked the repeating line "I still love you.." it says so much by itself. This is a very powerful poem. 5/5
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16 years ago
by jLegendc
Hehe i like this poem although it's too simple and it didn't have a flow bcoz of this stanza:
"No matter how many times I get hurt
How many glasses of tears I cry
I still love you..."
express your feelings more and you'll write a wonderful poem =] ipakita mo lang ang lahat ng iyong nararamdaman! hehe you're pinoy right?
